Sorry, I still don’t like it, unless you changed the list of authors as well;)

Seriously: page 12 looks much better. but page 14 again looks claustrophobic. Basically, it looks like there is a war raging between the text and the figure; the figure is winning, but the text is on the counter attack on the upper flank, so who knows how it is going to end…

On page 12, at least, the fighting parties declared truce, with demilitarized zone around the 6th inch of the page.

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